Long sentence? Deal with it

Couldn’t help but laugh after reading this extremely long and awkward sentence:

But because the Lakers are strangely scared of the luxury tax, the team dealt him for absolutely nothing last December, throwing both Odom and GM Mitch Kupchak (who you know did not want to make a deal that would cripple his team’s already-nonexistent depth) to the wolves in an attempt to explain away Odom’s fragile emotions in the wake of an agreed-upon but eventually squashed deal that would deal Lamar to New Orleans in a deal that would send Chris Paul to the Lakers.

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3 Responses to Long sentence? Deal with it

  1. thecarloshz says:

    Eh, that’s kind of the way he writes. I tend to do that, and I feel like my sentences are still pretty cohesive.

  2. Smeg says:

    It was more the way he used ‘deal’ 3 times at the end.

  3. S says:

    Fcking dwyer!

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